I read your short-form manuscript (essay, chapter, or full draft) and provide a 2-3 page written assessment that identifies your strengths, outlines next steps, and offers kind yet specific guidance for revision. This service includes sentences you can use for hooks or query letters if you're ready for that stage.
Optional: add a 30-minute follow-up Zoom session to discuss the assessment.
This session is right for you if:
You have a draft and need clear direction on what to do next
You can’t put your finger on what it needs to sing, or send the main message home
You work best one-on-one with a compassionate professional
You aren’t interested in in-line edits (yet) but want detailed feedback
You want a blend of encouragement, perspective, and concrete steps
I read your short-form manuscript (essay, chapter, or full draft) and provide a 2-3 page written assessment that identifies your strengths, outlines next steps, and offers kind yet specific guidance for revision. This service includes sentences you can use for hooks or query letters if you're ready for that stage.
Optional: add a 30-minute follow-up Zoom session to discuss the assessment.
This session is right for you if:
You have a draft and need clear direction on what to do next
You can’t put your finger on what it needs to sing, or send the main message home
You work best one-on-one with a compassionate professional
You aren’t interested in in-line edits (yet) but want detailed feedback
You want a blend of encouragement, perspective, and concrete steps
